This is a pass Chai-Ann. To bring that grade up, you need to:
- Explain your points more fully, at the moment they are too brief. - Apply much more detailed examples from both your news broadcast and the documentary you have chosen - Link your examples back to each point you make so your writing has structure - Add in a paragraph about the contract with the viewer, as this is required in the assignment brief for task 1a. Read through this and double check you are including everything - Proofread it for spelling, punctuation, grammar, sentence structure errors
This is a pass Chai-Ann. To bring that grade up, you need to:
ReplyDelete- Explain your points more fully, at the moment they are too brief.
- Apply much more detailed examples from both your news broadcast and the documentary you have chosen
- Link your examples back to each point you make so your writing has structure
- Add in a paragraph about the contract with the viewer, as this is required in the assignment brief for task 1a. Read through this and double check you are including everything
- Proofread it for spelling, punctuation, grammar, sentence structure errors
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